Open Poetry #19 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
On Top tissues full of salty tears turn into the tiniest mirrors and in each one I see the clearest reflection of me the good, the bad is all a part where is it that I start and the day that they stop I will finally be on top "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a nice thought, tears reflecting yourself. like this a lot lady. floria Floria |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, I hope the next time you see this reflection, it is out of happiness... Beautiful words |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I think to express tears to others is the most wonderful feeling and rejuvenating of all, sweet friend, I for one cry a lot and sometimes people think I'm crazy but I think it is important and I love to to open myself to my dearest friends! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Helen - they say that tears cleanse our soul. If that't the case, my soul must be shining!! Very nice write. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Helen, I believe that every tear drop is just a little bit of rain falling to make tomorrow's flowers grow. The secret is to look and find a little ray of sunshine and the just let nature grow that pretty flower and bring it to a bloom. ![]() ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
positive outlook I think ![]() Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
tissues full of salty tears turn into the tiniest mirrors and in each one I see the clearest reflection of me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is a most wonderful thought Helen. Lovely piece and much enjoyed tonight. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think you're on top and just don't realize it, Helen. Well written. jwesley |
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