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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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On Top tissues full of salty tears turn into the tiniest mirrors and in each one I see the clearest reflection of me the good, the bad is all a part where is it that I start and the day that they stop I will finally be on top "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a nice thought, tears reflecting yourself. like this a lot lady. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, I hope the next time you see this reflection, it is out of happiness... Beautiful words |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I think to express tears to others is the most wonderful feeling and rejuvenating of all, sweet friend, I for one cry a lot and sometimes people think I'm crazy but I think it is important and I love to to open myself to my dearest friends! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Helen - they say that tears cleanse our soul. If that't the case, my soul must be shining!! Very nice write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Helen, I believe that every tear drop is just a little bit of rain falling to make tomorrow's flowers grow. The secret is to look and find a little ray of sunshine and the just let nature grow that pretty flower and bring it to a bloom. ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
positive outlook I think Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
tissues full of salty tears turn into the tiniest mirrors and in each one I see the clearest reflection of me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is a most wonderful thought Helen. Lovely piece and much enjoyed tonight. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think you're on top and just don't realize it, Helen. Well written. jwesley |
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