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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
As I lie awake on this dark lonely nite I ponder how our sacred bond began to break. Everything about us just seemed rite, so what came between our deep love? The deadly build-up of rust from this betrayal of trust forces me to shove all that ever mattered to me far away. Now, here alone I lay, emotionally bruised and battered by your incredible ignorance of the simplistic significance your glowing smile had on my pathetic existance. I just can't go on, the pain is way too strong. Wish with me you would stay for just one more sunny day. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very sad write, Joe, to pain for someone who might never understand what they mean to you. Well written pain. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Joe, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your tears and I hope that your request is fulfilled and you continue a sacred bond of love with the one your heart desires happily! (sad sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I felt like you are writing from a perspective that you wanted someone but you have slowly come to the realization that they are not the right one...I went through this not too long ago...now I feel like I am with the right one...James |
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