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{{{Women….Would the world be without them? }}}
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 ~*~ Women…Would the world be without them? ~*~ Women Along the line of time Have been creatures so sublime That men accused them to be Creatures of mystery At times they accused them to be The source of misery But what’s the world Without women? Could you look at it and say That it would be better without them Alway? Could you ever pretend? That you won’t care If they are not there to share Share the smiles The endless miles And be with you Through clear…or cloudy skies Could you imagine How would the world ever be Without their enchanting melody? Would you really live it without them Even if you were granted eternity? The earth is but a woman Wrapped up in all hues In her quietness, in her anger She is but a woman With all the different moody clues You live in and out of her womb And she… A kind mother Showers you with one thing After the other So tell me…sir Would you ever try To wish a world without a woman close by? And do you think would you ever be happy No matter how hard you try? . . . . . . Ah…silence! & a fluttering look in your eye then I should need no reply ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Very true, dear one...the world just wouldn't be this beautiful or complete without us...thanks for sharing....  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
spoken well my friend. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye because I think women are one of the most beautiful gifts of man just as God is and the person who makes me most happiest of all is the woman of my dreams, Joanna! (kiss on cheek) May we all respect and celebrate women like you always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~amig~ Yeeeees..... And I hope they know that well ...  thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sven~ So you agree? Thank you dearest friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Noah~ Awwwww......I'm so glad that you loved it so. I thought this poem is going to go way down the page without any one really noticing it Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I loved the feel of this one, and it was in my mind a setting in a Victorian era where they were speaking in a garden openly about this. Oh see, my imagination ran away with it, but isn't that what a good poem does? I loved it and of course into my library it went! ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, I am a guy...hope you know... and I don't think I let women go... For without their faces to see I would not be writing this poetry. Very nice poem, much enjoyed...and please don't tell the rest of the guys that I agree.... |
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