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peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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0 posted 2002-03-08 01:01 AM


I see a little girl sitting all alone.
With noone to care or no home.
She hasn't had a bath in days.
No love has seemed to come her way.
I asked her where's her mom or dad?
She hangs her head and looks so sad.
My dad left a long time ago.
And then we had to leave our home.
Mom and I, we lived on the street.
Nothing but strangers did I meet.
Mom became very sick one night.
Then I was filled with so much fright.
I hide as much as I can.
For there's so much I don't understand.
Would you let me try and help you out?
Let me show you what life's all about.
Then she put her hand in mine.
And we walked together in time.
I took her and bought some clothes to wear.
I showed her how people could care.
The she went and took a bath.
And I swear I could've heard a laugh.
I called to take the steps to keep her with me.
For she was a precious child in need.
The process wasn't easy, but I towed the road.
To make this child my own.
The day she was given to me.
So many tears that I couldn't see.
And then she showed me that beautiful smile.
And I knew it was worth it all the while.
God had given me an angel from above.
An angel to give all of my love.

Peaches

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-03-08 01:28 AM


This is lovely peaches...James
peaches73533
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2 posted 2002-03-08 02:03 AM


James:Thank you my dear frien
Peaches

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-03-08 02:03 AM


Peaches,
You do indeed know how to get inside my heart! My soft spot wasn't in my head. Thank you so much for this poem.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

peaches73533
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4 posted 2002-03-08 02:35 AM


LarryC:Glad you cleared that up Thank you.I'm elated that I could touch your heart.Your welcome dear sweet friend.
Peaches

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5 posted 2002-03-08 04:59 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am flooding in tears now after reading this, you are a true angel to us all and I know that deep in my heart He wanted you to protect her and love he rwith all your heart in destiny! (kiss on cheek) She will always love you so much just as I know you will always love her, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, you and her are both true angels! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-08 10:19 PM


Peaches, this is the simple pure true love that Christ taught. I can tell from your words that God is already richly blessing you. Your deed is Christianity in action. More valuable than all of the Cathedrals in Europe. You are my heroine. You are simply God's Angel. And I send you my humble prayers and LOVE! God Bless you, Peaches!! Abundantly.

((Peaches))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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