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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2002-03-07 05:59 PM

I am provider and
nurturer of needs. I am a mother,
a teacher of young ones, an ouchie kisser.
Lend me a little one
and I will love it.

I am a dancer, when no one
is there to see.

I can fix your computer
a lot better
than I can fix what’s wrong
with me.

I once was Love, I was the stirring
within, to his lips the curve
of his adore;
to his arms, the filling;
to his heart, the beating.

I love to drive
to challenge speed.

My body is pleasing
if only to me.

I am a wife, though more times
than not, I find that
I must not know how to be.

I am a writer, or at least,
I try to be.

I am all and none of these, I am
but a flesh bound soul
awaiting release.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-07 06:08 PM

BRAVO!!! I can see what you mean here, sweet friend, there are so many wonderful things that make you the loving person you are, yet our mission in life is simple, and as long as we all remain close to what we dream for and to Him, we will find all our heart desires! (smiles) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

2 posted 2002-03-07 06:17 PM

Jellybeans Hi there this is a very pleasing and well written poem, you are all those things and more. This is inspiring writing I really do like this one

Well done very well done

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-03-07 06:23 PM

JellyBeans~

'I am a mother,
a teacher of young ones, an ouchie kisser.
Lend me a little one
and I will love it.'

'the stirring
within, to his lips the curve
of his adore;
to his arms, the filling;
to his heart, the beating.'

You've just written the résumé of my heart~

Powerfully done with delicate inking of strength~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-03-07 06:26 PM

jellybeans
I know:
So many things to be, or not
when and if to sigh, I try
to be the me I am right now

"I am all and none of these, I am
but a flesh bound soul
awaiting release."

You are a writer!

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2002-03-07 06:52 PM

thank you all so much.......I wrote this because I was chatting with someone new and he asked, well who are you?...and ...I didn't have an answer and I am a writer...so I wrote a poem...rofg...
glad you all liked

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-03-07 06:59 PM

I do not have ability enough to express what you are....so I'll just say...AWESOME!!

(did I mention I have an ouchie?

)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-03-08 09:24 AM

rofg @ Balladeer's ouchie... opportunistic fella, isn't he? *G*

Did I remember to tell you that this is one of my very favorites??? *S*

Now you know I'm rotten at critique, but I'll make an exception here. *S* You can leave off that "try to be" phrase... for you ARE a writer. *S* No doubt here at all. *S*

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2002-03-08 11:02 AM

rofg@the both of you...
now...whose gonna be brave enough to ask him where it is?
rofg

thank you both

I needed to smile

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