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. . . A promise and a pledge . . .
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. . . A promise and a pledge . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
not just lip service promises of our passion mouth to mouth whispers  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ mouth to ear promise eye to eye pledging of love my troth in a kiss Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no words are needed we speak the language of love when our lips collide |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
This is nicely done. I like it. Bob |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
very nicely done.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hearing whispers kiss between two of mind in kind watchers smile broadly |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ I give up! You are the CHAMP! RMW ~ Hey, guy! Where have you been hiding? Welcome back my friend  AWC ~ Long time no see. Thanks for the visit Sunshine ~ I cry quarter! Between you and Susan I don't have much of a chance Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romance flashes from your eyes as you pen the most wonderful promise and pledge...this melted the core of a star...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Enveloping vows In the trace of loves first kiss Moist in loves sweetness (smiles) Awwwwwww, you truly are a master at senryus and romance, sweet friend, your gorgeous words never fail to make me smile! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Yes...yes...yes. Okay... you are way too romantic(of course I love it) |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Interloper Hi there, I like this, I don’t know if I’ve got this senyu right, since mum can’t do them. 5, 7, 5, is that right? Move together into heat Sigh as the kiss ends You are a good writer a very good writer   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Krissy finds the way finding Interloper's smile by her Senryu |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Interloper as always! And look at Krissy! By George I think she's got it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Karen ~ You make my heart melt Noah ~ You always raise my spirits ... so keep outta my Brandy! walker ~ Too romantic? There is NO such thing! Krissy ~ By jove, you've got it Lady ~ Are you reading my mind again? Nancy ~ You are absolutely right, as usual Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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