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0 posted 2002-03-07 09:35 AM


She had never been a springtime Butterfly
But she had flown early from home
Leaving behind a family too busy
Listening to the tenor notes of their
Own voices moaning

Iambe’s  first home after that was one of isolation
An AM radio her music, she learned to dance
Listening to oldies, country, and Chicago’s rock
While her audience was the occasional deer or squirrel.
She moved in with him, because he had promised
Something better.

It was better
It was void of the tenor tones of family
And he worked on the road during the week
Leaving her to fend for herself.

She learned to fix things
Because she had to

She learned to drink
To kill the silence

She learned to leave
To save her sanity.

No Spring Butterfly
But she did learn to fly…

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1 posted 2002-03-07 09:40 AM


No spring butterfly
But she did learn to fly

*sigh* you have created a character who you have given life to by breathing so much reality into her from the poems you write...This poem is absolutely magnificent...I love it...I absolute love these lambes...thank you....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-03-07 11:02 AM


Cpat

"She learned to drink
To kill the silence

She learned to leave
To save her sanity."

In just a few words I understand her.  You know how to bring life with words


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3 posted 2002-03-07 11:02 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I'm really becoming a fan of your series, sweet friend, your words encourage us all to fly like the butterfly and reflect the beauty of the ages through our hearts and nurture them dear! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-07 11:04 AM


We are all more secure when we "get our wings."

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5 posted 2002-03-07 01:38 PM



Dog GONE but I'm glad she's back in the blue....

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6 posted 2002-03-07 03:40 PM


She learned to fix things
Because she had to

She learned to drink
To kill the silence

She learned to leave
To save her sanity


Thanks for the background.  On to the next one!

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7 posted 2002-03-07 04:10 PM


loved it ron..as all your Iambe poems..all are captivating..

           ~Vic

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8 posted 2002-09-26 02:13 PM


Phew...
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