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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Something in my blood runs wild... adrenaline's my energy-- a dancing, laughing, wicked child-- a spinning top unleashed from string. Something in my heart beats twice... as if in need of memory. My thoughts are tumble of the dice, I gamble on the green of me. There is something volatile, even in my quest for peace. I yearn for the phenomenal-- I long to dance with me... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
There is something volatile, even in my quest for peace. I yearn for the phenomenal-- I long to dance with me... Stop this...I need to go to sleep! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling at you* .... *skipping around the forums singing* ........ "this about you--I already knew" ... lalalala doodoodooo" wanna sing with me? ... you know the one  "people see me I'm a challenge to your balance I'm over your heads how I confound you and astound you to know I must be one of the wonders of god's own creation and as far as you can see you can offer me no explanation"   |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, wonderfully written, full of pep and zeal. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well my girl, the wave lengths were talking, apparently, for I hadn't read yours before posting mind, but I am so glad we are both in dance! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes i know what you mean..we sort of forget to dance with ourselves...makes me think of when i use to dance and hold on to the doorknob ha..  ..when i was doing dishes as a teen with my mom..  i was a real teenybopper.  ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOVE this....your words are always vibrant to me!  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) So very well-said, sweet friend, I think we all have these times where we forget to dance with ourselves then when we cry, when we find ourselvces dancing in hope, we feel peace within ourselves again! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - finally have I learned to dance with me some. Still growing though, and still learning... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the adrenaline in this poem, Serenity.....It has such energy and is so very beautifully written. I love "My thoughts are tumble of the dice, I gamble on the green of me."  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"I yearn for the phenomenal-- I long to dance with me..." this is wonderful serenity and hey, I dance with me all the time. nice write, floria Floria |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
quite a vibrant little piece, and not many people I know like themselves that much |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I want to say thanks to all, but especially ecrivan--for getting the gist of this one. It took me a long time for me to "like" me! I still don't most of the time, but I think I'm getting to a place where I just might give me a chance! back atchya! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hope you never stop dancing with yourself and if you do? I will be there with my tap shoes on. |
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