Open Poetry #19 |
Tiptoe |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Soft sound through the corridors at night masked intruder stalks, no presence in sight thought from the top of my head, goblins tiptoe too as the wicked witch that gave sleeping beauty an adieu. Nutcracker ballet: swans coalesce, depart, flutter by season after season changes, tiptoed through the sky at brinks of war, modern man walks on glass,keeps relatively sublime. intruders gain access to our treasure troves, tiptoe in our minds. soft sounds tiptoe to babe's crib in the night fairies splash magic sand, then take flight; chase darker spirits out the bedroom doors of our heads season after season passes, tiptoe sounds clutter steads. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-07-2002 02:15 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is a GREAT write I love this line.... "thought from the top of my head, goblins tip toe too" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
had to make some corrections though, tiptoe is one word |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, I have a dream catcher in my room to chase away evil spirits that try and invade my dreams; I guess I have gotten into that idea after suffering many nightmares as a child and wanting ever so much to have happy dreams! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your wonderful words always amaze me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, those spirits are always around..hehe |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
We're not all that bad. *grins* Nice write. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Masked Intruder, if you're referring to us not all being a clutter of spirits vying for headspace, I fully agree..glad you liked it..tried looking you up on your website and cannot get to it, has it changed? |
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