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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-03-06 08:28 PM


In Glimpse


My fingers wish
to comb your hair
to feel the years
it has gone through

My lips could purse
to touch your cheek
to sense the fear
that guards your smile

My eyes might see
to hidden depths
to catch in glimpse
your wounded heart

My arms would like
to hug your breasts
to know the warmth
you hold so dear




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Martie
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1 posted 2002-03-06 08:43 PM


Krawdad

Longing in words..beautiful and melting.

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2 posted 2002-03-06 08:48 PM




(sigh) Such yearning fills your words, sweet friend, I hope you find all your heart desires and true joy forever will sing in your heart! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-06 08:55 PM


Krawdad, you sure do cause me to sigh!
Beautifully written.
~Hugs and smiles, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-03-06 08:59 PM


Beautifully expressed desires Krawdad. well done. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

walker
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5 posted 2002-03-06 09:24 PM


Great poem.
Bridget Shenachie
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6 posted 2002-03-06 09:29 PM


Krawdad,

This is such a beautiful, sensitive, compassionate poem.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Shenachie

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7 posted 2002-03-12 09:58 AM


e...i love this...h
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