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{{{ The Lady in Gray }}}
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{{{ The Lady in Gray }}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~ The Lady in Gray ~*~ The Lady in gray, With a color of a dark cloudy day, Is an enchanting mystery along the way Would her dark clouds ever rain? Wipe out all pain? Would you endure her cloudy day? Or would you choose to leave her way? Remember…sir That clouds are always there before the rain And if you choose not to remain How would you ever gain, The soft cleansing rain? The Lady in gray Would always make you wonder Of what she would say Or do not say Make you forever pray That you’d be able to decode her gray And see her smile not lost in midday She walks on the threshold of two worlds Two colors None matched by the other Embrace this mystery of the mixed hues watch the shifting breath And all the small clues Soon you’d be lost in her gray skies Forever searching her eyes And waiting breathlessly For her smiles. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN!!! Your beautiful words always amaze me, sweet friend, and amidst her cloudy dress, there will always be asilver lining shining from her lips, a promise that the rain will fall and create a rainbow ribbon of delight after the storm! (kiss on cheek) bWe all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Melody you did a lovely job with this, floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!This poem is stunning...I love the way it flowed and the feelings it gave...BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fantastic, Melody. I like her mixed hues. This has so many good lines. Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Noah... "and amidst her cloudy dress, there will always be asilver lining shining from her lips, a promise that the rain will fall and create a rainbow ribbon of delight after the storm! " I loved that..... "amidst her cloudy dress, there will always be asilver lining shining from her lips," A promise of the softest kiss coming with the rain to wipe away all pain Thank you sweet friend...your words and presence are always appreciated and loved... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` ~Floria.. Thank you dearly.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Startime.. I'm so glad that you loved it... Big hugs to you... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sandra... She is a lady of mixed colors...sin't she? I'm happy my dearest...that you enjoyed it. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some say there is no beauty in gray... if they saw this, they would change their mind |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I hope they would dear lady..for certainly there is beauty in gray no matter what we say and isn't there beauty in a dark cloudy day?  Thank you dearest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what gets lost in gray?? or, what do we see when we look with grayness?? hmm. . . well done my friend. . . you make each one of them your own. . . and give them life. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
We get lost....& gained in gray as we look at the cloudy day and dream of rain coming our way... Won't you agree? Thank you dear friend..your words and comments are always greatly welcomed and appreciated ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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