Open Poetry #19 |
Serendipity |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serendipity Do you know of the place, the place called serendipity? It is between the lines you write, in the negative space where art lives. In the soft loam that holds worms, it is the seed that came from the mountain. It was planted in the poetic haven of a forest of evergreen, just a thought that grew into a poem. It follows a mountain stream on some cascading whim then falls into unexpected joy. It is closing your eyes and turning around three times and pointing to the one who you will love forever. In a circle that turns with spin the bottle it is a kiss in the closet of sweet smelling memory And do I dare say that some grand designer did not focus your attention on a place close enough for me to touch? You fell into my garden like a seed into loam, for I had been waiting, fallow, for your tender planting, and that is serendipity. ____ From Haven, 3-01 |
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Sunshine
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and if you dip me in serene and up my ippity if you will why, I would sing a serendip and give you all my fill for you are my serene soft light my cumber gone undone and I would sing a serendip if you still write me fun... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely dear Martie! Wishing you serendipity by the bucketful ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, there's no feeling more beautiful than falling in love when you least expect it, this is breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
t is closing your eyes and turning around three times and pointing to the one who you will love forever. In a circle that turns with spin the bottle it is a kiss in the closet of sweet smelling memory ====================================== Its READING YOUR POETRY |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetSis~ 'It is closing your eyes and turning around three times and pointing to the one who you will love forever. In a circle that turns with spin the bottle it is a kiss in the closet of sweet smelling memory' It IS all that .... and throw in a new granddaughter and it's perfect ! Martie .... I love this sooooooooooo much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
absolutely beautiful..and I like your new picture...it's very soft and lovely *s "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is absolutely wonderful! How I love to see the world through your eyes And serendipity is discovering yet another *perfect* Martie poem This is a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenuppity.... |
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Denise
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Fantastic expression, Martie! Love it! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You fell into my garden like a seed into loam, for I had been waiting, fallow, for your tender planting, and that is serendipity. oh martie, this poem is serendipity! Gorgeous writing m'friend. Maree |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How delightful Martie! Like the serendipity you write of, your poetry is an unexpected joy to read. Honest and truly this was simply charming. *applause* |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
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"You fell into my garden" Oh Martie, gave me goosebumps. good ones. floria Floria |
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