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. . . Cleaving . . . revision from #18 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
candelight caress passion's dance is evolving begun with a kiss ~*~ desires are aflame eyes limpid pools in the heat I would drown in them ~*~ welcome bindery bound by passion's hot demands by choice we unite ~*~ lost to the moment passion is love's explosion two in love, yet one Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Revised, or better? Hard to know when first perfect Try, try, try again |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your love is going to fall in love with you all over again everyday, this is a true gem! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
It better be one Atleast for today Two may make us choose... oh...will it?? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am getting in a romantic mood here, all alone!! All this beautiful love poetry is filling my head with visions of.. well.. assorted things Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper this is perfect! Now...let's get cupid to find someone real quick for Sandra! ~Valentine Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very romantic, this is beautifully written couldn't have picked a better day for such a poem as this. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensual...as only you can make it...I love the whole feel of it...Magnificent...Now Doc. Love...you must have cupid's ear...make sure he sends a passionate man Sandra's way...**big hugs**  HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I simply loved the title to this one and the poem did not disapoint |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Interloper - excellent write, enjoyed reading... BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Interloper- Lovely and romantic write. Well written, my friend. Happy Valentine's Day! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ok,Ok! *bump*  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great piece!!! Especially the 'bottom line'  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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