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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-15 02:51 PM

~*~
your soul touches mine
wearing like water on rock
yielding yet forceful
my heart feels your touch softly
melting into yours ... now one
~*~
in that one moment
I give you my naked heart
for eternity
that perfect moment my dear
when we learn our love is true
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-02-15 02:55 PM

...Perfect !!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-15 02:56 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile! (big hugggssssss) May you forever hold this gift of love true forever and may your love forever be true with joy everlasting! We all love you so much!!! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautifulo heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

P.S: Ooohhhhhh...later I'll e-mail you my part, sorry for the delay! (smiles)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-15 02:57 PM

Tanka very much! Very Nice!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2002-02-15 03:53 PM

Beautiful.....thank you for sharing, and a thread is going straith to my library.

((hugs))
Charisma

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

5 posted 2002-02-15 04:19 PM

Beautiful! Wonderful! Perfect! Thanks!
((Interloper))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

6 posted 2002-02-15 04:52 PM

quote:
in that one moment
I give you my naked heart
for eternity
that perfect moment my dear
when we learn our love is true

~~~~~~~~~~

moments in time teach
love is eternally spun
when truth meets hearts hope
souls uncovered, secrets shared
bound together for all time

~~~~~~~~~~

A beautifully done work, it inspired me.

Thank you!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-15 05:07 PM

softness of your love
caresses with gentleness
setting fires burning
as I blush with my desire
to taste passion on your lips

in magic moments
when we embrace the tenderness
of intimacy
we become one heart, one flesh,
moments become a lifetime

*sigh* I too was inspired by this magnificent poem....*sigh* so sensually beautiful...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-15-2002 05:08 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-02-15 05:57 PM

You are the sunshine
within the warmth of my kiss
melting upon lips
the taste of midsummers rain
lingering within the night

You are my heartbeat
within the light of the moon
shining upon me
the reflection in my eyes
the mirror within my soul

~Victoria~

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-15-2002 07:08 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-02-15 06:11 PM

This is perfect, and inspired a lot of good thoughts, too.
Sandra

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2002-02-16 11:05 AM

like water on rock
love gently shapes who we are
without any force
smoothing away the roughness
leaving hearts touched, not altered

~*~

learning love is true
perfection of two hearts, whole
emotions set free
in forever, you and me
exposed hearts safe in our love

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

11 posted 2002-02-16 11:15 AM

Interloper - A heart once hardend like a rock, now exposed and vulnerable from love. Very good.

Dave

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

12 posted 2002-02-16 12:33 PM

perfect!!

good title for it!!

it is!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

13 posted 2002-02-16 12:49 PM

EXCELLENT!!!!! Wonderful expression and every word like glistening dewdrops upon the heart. ***Ivy Rose

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

14 posted 2002-02-16 03:50 PM

Interloper, wonderful Tanka, wonderful poetry.

God looked down to earth
And said blessed be the two
perfect loving hearts
And may their love stay perfect
Throughout all eternity.

Perfect Love.

((Interloper))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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