Open Poetry #19 |
Returning to Iambe |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It had been Months Since I left Iambe laughing at me As I walked out swearing NEVER No more…. I’d seen Texas panhandle And Arizona sun in my rearview, Danced with a few Senoritas Trying to quiet night fears of growing old. I pulled back into town after all this time And headed for the Railstop Bar To wash the dust and taste of crow I was about to eat from my mouth When I saw her truck. She was there, waiting as she said she would be When we had talked on the phone A couple nights ago. I walked in and took the stool beside her As Joe the tender sat a beer in front of me. Her eyes were still the bluest I had ever seen And this time they weren’t laughing at me And she didn’t seem to have drawn a bead either. I almost fell off my stool When she actually put an arm around me To the tune of “I missed you” falling from her lips. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I enjoyed this very much.It's a sad thing to be laughed at when younger and it seems when we grow up our standards seem to change. peaches |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Morning Peaches, this is part of a much longer ongoing ( never ending some would say) series of poems about Iambe. Iambe is a construct of my imagination from people I have known...and can be quite a pill.. but holds an appeal to me perhaps because she as a character is so inclusive of many people.. Thanks for the comment and if you want to find the other Iambe poems they are in the archives somewhere. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I remember the stories about lambe...they have been missed. More please? ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've missed you... I've missed these stories! So good to see them again in the bluest of pages... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I sure hope she stays nice this time, she is as you said, quite a pill! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* sounds like you got lost in those blue eyes again...I really liked reading this poem...and I will have to take a look at your other lambe poems....**big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, your lambe sweries is wonderful, I am becoming a huge fan of your beautiful work now!!! MORE, MORE, I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
"I miss you" they are beautiful words said with the eyes or lips..you are on a roll Ron ~Vic |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think it is the pill in her that makes her so adorable. Enjoyed! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, I really love this |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful... |
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