Open Poetry #19 |
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Demanding & Want |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
You demand, Then in getting what you want, Are upset, And then mad, Because it wasn’t your want, Things gone bad You’re beset By emotions you don’t want, Your trying Turns crying Demanding will get it not, Understand It’s all gone what you once sought. Gloom |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
morning Gloom.... like the idea of this one... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Cpat hair, Sometime we forget that when we force something The results don’t have to go the way we desired. Especially when dealing with another person. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Gloom |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds pretty resolved... Sometimes we take a step beyond that mutually acceptable point and find we've somehow messed up everything... How sad when that happens.. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Aszard, this is so very sad, I know this feeling all too well, for so long I have always wanted to be free and find all my heart desires and I always have failed, though now I believe I have finally succeeded in finding true happiness! (sigh) My heart goes out to all these people who perservere and struggle, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I like this, shows how some people even in getting what they want still have a bad attitude. nice write. floria Floria |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very well said.Sometimes when we push things, the outcome is not what we expected.We should all learn to be more patient in all things.Nice write this morning. Peaches |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nan, Sometimes it is difficult to stop, One must know their own limitations, but more so Be considerate of the others. Thank you, Mistletoe Angel, I hope you have found it, You deserve someone as kind and sweet as you are. Thank you, strbbux, I’m not so sure it’s a Bad attitude as a misplaced hope, Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you, Peaches73533 I think you understand what I hoped to say I’m pleased you liked my writing. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
powerless over others ... change comes from with ourselves.... demanding just pushes others away.... freedom to be who we are is a powerful bond |
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