Open Poetry #19 |
Love's Warmth |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Love’s Warmth Sometimes in the dark silence of night time, when you talk of the past, I can hear the faint echoes Of the ghosts that haunt your struggling soul. And all I want to do is hold my arms open and feel you come to me, letting my arms wrap around you, consuming you in my love’s warmth. I want to feel your head rest against the soft swell of my breast. I want to stroke your hair and whisper words of my undying love. I want to attempt to chase away the memories that haunt your heart. I want my love consume you, protect you. I want to make you feel safe and peaceful, if only for one night. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nicely presented. I truly enjoyed this piece Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
your love topics are soothing to the eyes and to the mind enjoy them |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness always and I wish for love to forever touch your heart and make you feel safe and warm just as he will always make you feel! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very loving and heartfelt poem rosepetals25, floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This warmth...the feeling is one that we all do crave and enjoy....You have written of it very well....Thanx Tara... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh...this brought tears to my eyes....this poem is truly filled with love's warmth....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You'll make a good mom some day, Tara, because this sounds like a poem of a mother consoling her child after a bad dream. I know it's not about a child, however, and even as adults, we also sometimes need consoling like a child that wakes with a nightmare. Nice work! *hugs* Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is love indeed. To want to take another’s pain and chase it away. How beautifully you have written this Tara. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Interloper - Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed. DS - Thank you. Noah - You're so sweet, thanks Floria - Thanks for stopping in. Barry - Thank you for coming into read. Karen - I am lucky enough to have the gift of love And believe me, I know how lucky I am. Thank you. Michael - Awww You know how much your response meant to me, thank you. James - Thanks Tracey - Thank you for coming in I'm glad you liked. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The longing and devotion is felt in this tender, sincere write Tara, Its so hard to love long distance. Im sure he felt the warmth of these words...and hes lucky to have you |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Tara - Such strong emotion is so vividly expressed in this write. Nicely done. Dave |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes that is all we can ask for...I like this one Tara...very soft, gentle... |
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