Open Poetry #19 |
An Angel`s Tears |
N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
I decided to take a walk one day. To look at the flowers along the way. For some reason I don`t know why. I turned my eyes toward the sky. As I just stood there in awe. From an angel`s eyes I saw a tear fall. The angel didn`t look sad and wore a smile. I just stood there quiet for awhile. Then I saw a door open wide. God was calling the angel inside. Then the angel seem to say to me. These are tears of joy I hope you can see. Then I realized as the angel turned away. This special angel was my brother Ray. This is dedicated to my brother who passed away on March 6,1997. Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (03-05-2002 01:18 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet Juanita, my heart goes out to your loss but I know deep down with all my heart Ray will always love you and guide you with his love from above and will always be blessed to you, a true angel sister, in his heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful and sensitive! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,thank you as always for your sweet words. Juanita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful tribute you've written for your brother... The love shines through your words and anniversaries are always so hard... You have my sympathy as well as my appreciation for a fine poem. *S* |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Suthern,you are so right an anniversary of a death is very hard.Thank you so much for reading this. Juanita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita my dearest friend Oh how I’ve missed your writing darling girl and this OH MY this is so beautiful an amazing stunning example of spirit in form. You darling girl really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills Always your work is a delight, even when you’re writing sad your writing bubbles with light. Thank you darling heart for this it teaches us that HE always looks after us. Beautiful darling girl as always this is beautiful Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi Juanita..hugss..yes im sure he is an angel watching over you.. enjoyed ~Vic |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Juanita...what a special tribute to Ray. I am sure that he is looking down at you now and thanking and blessing you for it. I know how hard these days can be, so here are some special ((hugs)) to help you get through it. Its so good to see you back here again, even with this saddest of poems. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,thank you as always for your sweet reply and being my friend. Love, Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,thank for reading. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,I guess talking to you last night help me to do this.I think it will get through this anniversary of his death.TAKE CARE! Love, Juanita |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
How wonderful.....& touching. Thank you for sharing ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful tribute Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Juanita, dear lady, my heart was stood upon, in so many ways, when i read this. Your poem, written in delicate, loving terms, is a perfect way to remember your own family blood. That graphic also reminded me of a frigid winter day, when my grandmother went thru all her old Christmas cards and letters with me, explaining each of them, and who they were. There were many of the old cards with wonderful pictures like the one you inserted with your poem. Don't you miss that type of painting? Would love to see more of THAT in galleries instead of the other. But the memories hit me, after both the poem and picture. Good ones, Juanita, and for that I thank you, tSR Keep your brother, and God, within your heart, always |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
My EnchantedMelody,thank you so much for reading this. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Interloper,thank you I really appreciate it. Juanita |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my, this drew tears N Carolina, simply beautiful. floria Floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
ShadowRider,thank you so much for reading this it was written from the heart. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,thank you my friend! Juanita |
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