Open Poetry #19 |
Yo Siempre Lo Amare |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is a song I wrote in Spanish, the English translation is below) Yo Siempre Lo Amare (I Will Always Love You) By: Noah Eaton 3/4/02 He navegado los siete mares Yo me siento como si he subido el Rocoso Vi una vez no conjunto del sol en el horizonte Las canciones cantadas nunca liberaron de labio Ahora todo aspiro Deberá caer en ojos para siempre Navegue lejos con mí en este barco salino Yo para siempre lo tendré en mis armamentos Besaré los labio magníficos dulces Yo me fundiré con usted bajo cada puesta del sol balsámica tropical He caído en ojos Yo siempre lo amaré Toco el cabello sedoso suave Cariciar su entibiar suave muslos Su fin del seno para minar Soñaremos lejos como amantes Con ojos aprecia suyo Usted siempre me seduce He estado buscando para el placer verdadero Cuál yo he encontrado en el corazón.. Besaré los labio magníficos dulces Yo me fundiré con usted bajo cada puesta del sol balsámica tropical He caído en ojos Yo siempre lo amaré Téngame esta noche.. Beseme en la luz de la luna Téngame esta noche He caído a pies.. Besaré los labio magníficos dulces Yo me fundiré con usted bajo cada puesta del sol balsámica tropical He caído en ojos Yo siempre lo amaré Téngame esta noche.. Beseme en la luz de la luna Téngame esta noche He caído a pies.. (English Version) I have sailed the seven seas I feel as though I've climbed the Rockies I once saw no sun set in the horizon Sung songs never released from my lips Now all I aspire Is to fall into your eyes forever Sail away with me on this saline ship I'll forever hold you in my arms I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset I've fallen into your eyes I will always love you... I touch your soft silky hair Caressing your soft warm thighs Your breast close to mine We will dream away as lovers With eyes like yours You always seduce me I've been searching for true pleasure Which I have found in your heart... I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset I've fallen into your eyes I will always love you... Hold me tonight... This magic moment in the moonlight Hold me tonight I've fallen to your feet... I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset I've fallen into your eyes I will always love you... Hold me tonight... This magic moment in the moonlight Hold me tonight I've fallen to your feet... I'll kiss your sweet gorgeous lips I'll melt with you under every tropical balmy sunset I've fallen into your eyes I will always love you... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-04-2002 10:51 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noahß Noé dulce, esto es encantador, y así que conmovedor, algún día yo deseo que sea joven otra vez para sentirse como esto. ...you ha pintado su lona en una muestra colorada del amor completo I am a little rusty, LOL but I hope you can undersand this..... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-04-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Noah, Very pretty. Nan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like this...fantastic writing...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Neat my friend...very neat...sure glad you gave the english version though or I'd never understood....hee hee.. jwesley |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks for the translation, though it sounded beautiful in both languages. Impressive, Noah! |
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Midnight Writer Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 28Texas |
splendid! Thank you! "No matter how great you are, you'll never be greater than yourself." |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
Wow spanish is such a romantic language!! THis poem is so dreamy i fell right into it. loved it xoxo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
muy bueno amigo...muy bueno |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,so very beautiful and I`m sure glad you did it in english. Juanita |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful in any language my dear friend |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Noah...what a lovely surprise...thank you so much for this seemingly effortless gift...you make it look so simple! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Muy bien, mi amigo. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Muy bueno, amigo mio. Muy dulce Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Where did you learned Spanish? This was romantic in both languages, I love it. Su romance ha captivado mi corazon. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Noah, this is a majestic piece of sonnata poetry. One of your best, in any language muy bonita! tSR |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HEy Noah, this is awesome. I could just hear the guitar music and castanets with this lovely poem. floria Floria |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yo te digo, sinceremente, mi amigo...es muy dificil escribir poesia en otros idiomas. A pesar de eso, lo has hecho con mucho exito. Te felicito! en el valle de los ciegos, el tuerto es rey...un dicho favorito de mi |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ella debe ser bastante una chica Noé Hermoso! ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My reply has to be in plain ole English... it's my only language other than blonde gibberish. *G* This is beautiful, M'toe... your tender heart speaks a language all its own - love. *S* |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Just when I think you can't get any better... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah Muy especial palabra, mi amigo. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bravo! Your talent shines through in this! Well done Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, what lovely thoughts you hold in your heart. beautifully written and translated. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunningly beautiful...I could feel the music flowing perfectly through it...BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
A very beautifully romantic song Noah, I enjoyed seeing the Spanish, though I was grateful for the English translation! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah! This is beautiful sweetie! How come nearly everyone here at Passions speaks Spanish??! Thanks for the translation as I wouldn't have been able to understand...although the Spanish is very romantic. Gosh...you could put it to music so easily as well. Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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