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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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send you a bill in the mail file a letter without fail fill a form hook a worm at the bottom you will sign write on the dotted line fill in the blanks write shallow thanks memo to department chief note about occasional grief post script at the end of statements final summary of latent payments. form,notes and memos have lines rally attention, take your time jargon is often quoted in free verse when misunderstood, punishment is worse. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This brings to mind the importance of reading the fine print, as well as grasping what is written between the lines. Much enjoyed this thought-filled piece Ecrivan.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Had to laugh my friend...really enjoyed the read... jwesley |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Kit, So it goes with the fine print and shallow statements that tend to cover them, right on! JWesley, I supposed I could have been more lucid and descriptive, but chose a graphic approach  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Martin, I know just how you feel, it seems nowadays between the lines people are always adding more lines and when we try and draw conclusions, we tend to miss out on the messages within and we always face these uncertain obstacles sometimes in result! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Noah, thanks for reading, there are poems on courtesy and tolerance too for you to read if you haven't yet |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Good message, i like your style. monique |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
great to be appreciated Monique, there will be more |
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