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Remnants of a Friendship
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Remnants of a Friendship |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Was it something that I said? Or something I might have done? That would explain your absence As I wonder where you've gone We once would keep in contact It seemed almost once a week But my mailbox now stands empty While answers to my questions Are what I now seek Just a simple goodbye Was all that was required But you left me hanging here Alone in a friendship you had now tired I opened up my heart to you And you saw deep inside my soul But now I feel empty and defeated Inside my heart there is a hole But you have made your own decision And have decided not to stay So I will just bow out gracefully I will not stand in your way Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very heartwrenching, my heart goes out to you and I hope you have now been welcomed by true love and now you hold true happiness forever with your love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Enjoyed your poem... sometimes we do wonder where someone has gone without an explanation when it would be so simple to make a simple gesture to end the questioning. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mind reading again? I can relate to this one all too well. I sure hope your missing email arrives soon. Maybe it's stuck in cyber space, with my missing email links? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ok young lady, time to get out the funny stuff and let you have a little bit of it.. A very touching and well written write Sue. Enjoyed! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a sensitive and touching poem Sue, and all to often this is simply life. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
How well this fits any friendship when we wait on the other to make the first move. Seems to me I owe a whole bunch of e-mails... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Suetang, how true is this write. Sometimes friends are gone without a trace, without a goodbye and then they resurface without an explanation , without an excuse. It always leaves me wondering. I'm glad I'm not alone in this. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, It amazes me what an awesome poet you are! You put so much feeling into all your writes. And the rythm flows so nice. Don't ever go away. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
your title caught my eye...i love ponderings about friendships... i think it's amazing that no matter how often we face this sort of situation, our heart would still break whenever this dilemma resufaces...some days, i just want to give up and cry, "why bother?" HUGS.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I do sense a little (or much) hurt in this, and how can anyone leave your friendship Sue. This is a very "feeling" poem, I could feel your hurt. Nicely done, floria Floria |
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