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A(maze)d Wonderings
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I got lost in the spaces That lie between thoughts And actual expression No starry eyed novice am I But the yearly addition does not tell The whole of it, nor deny the truths Still I found myself in the spaces As I read your words Painting the images for me Telling me of your depths And I could not escape The void I am left wandering here Empty feeling emptier, Bare handedly reaching To feel my way around This vacant maze I am lost Will you search for me? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just whistle Ron and I will come in your direction! If I reach out my hand to you, will you take it? Great write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful write... I think tho... that we should hang one of those clapper things LOL clap on clap off around your neak to light up so we can find you when your lost LOL sorry first image that came to mind Connie |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Neat, my friend...though ta heck with the clapper...lets just get a big ol' Texas cowbell...we'll ALWAYS know where you are then! Enjoyed jwesley |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
cpat-- "I got lost in the spaces That lie between thoughts And actual expression" I know..I get lost too. Seems you have said it very well. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Awwwwwwww, we'd all be happy to lend you a helping hand when you need it the most, sweet friend, you are a dear friend to us all and we are always here for you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Through darkness a warmth came by way of feel then it came my way by feel in your light |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey...I'll even give you some bread crumbs so it doesn't happen again! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good write. I feel lost too. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Cpat...this is excellent and conveys feelings that I am sure are experienced by many of us. Still I found myself in the spaces As I read your words Painting the images for me Telling me of your depths And I could not escape The void I, too...often feel lost in a maze here...and I am also addicted to this place...but then...I probably have an addictive personality. Luckily I am more addicted to words than to substances.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Your poetry is wonderful, and this one reaches me like no other for some reason it seems. amazed... *Jenn* How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you are still looking to be found turn around but if you found yourself now that time has passed, tell me when you are lost again and I will join you |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow.......its like reading all of my poems, condensed into one...that is exactly what I was doing...searching for me, sending out signals asking for someone to help me find me...until someone did...word for word they wrote themselves to be exactly what I needed...until I realized that's what was happening and stopped writing words for them to act and react from, and suddenly my prince charming was 'no more'........sigh you are finding yourself, I did...just keep writing |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Dear Navigator, here's to an ever burning "flame" to light your way... beautiful writing... *smiles* ~Tier |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
C...you amaze many on here. I wander and wonder..too.. but no searching for me... at least not on the blue *s M |
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