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Something from Nothing
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Something from Nothing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Something from Nothing From some where in an empty mind Creative phantoms key and find A world of dreams and fantasies Creative worlds of ecstasy It grows within desires vine Intoxicates like flowered wine And brings from heaven down a mist Of Eden in a real exist. A world of butterflies that fly Across the flood of air and sky That brings to light a world of bright That flourishes within the night. How can a world from nothing come? A world exquisite in its sum And settle me as fine to be As sipping of exotic tea It seems creation starts right here Whenever butterflies appear. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Sy Hi there I think this is so very lovely, the dreaming and wonder of it all. Butterflies always a favourite of mine, you’ve written this beautifully, really I like this a lot. Thank you for touching my soul this morning   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It grows within desires vine Intoxicates like flowered wine And brings from heaven down a mist Of Eden in a real exist. A world of butterflies that fly Across the flood of air and sky That brings to light a world of bright That flourishes within the night. How can a world from nothing come? A world exquisite in its sum And settle me as fine to be As sipping of exotic tea It seems creation starts right here Whenever butterflies appear. ======================================== Actually, it seems whenever you are near ... butterflies appear  The imagery in this is delightful Sy-babers!! Good morning me Stinkylove ... I'm on my way to get the tea ... wont you join me... dont forget to bring your winkies *L*   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: THIS...is perfect...and suits me and mine very well...IWIHWT...thank you! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey i dunno but i created a very similar world myself and believe me, it's really really real... lol...now.. i'm not sure if you can get something from nothing but you sure can get something from something so if you start out believing it's something, then it's something and then later, it becomes something else indeed!! and your pome was something else indeed, too! i LIKED it!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'd never forget my winkies for you. Sunshine, Your invited too. Doreen, Loved your comment. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy OH MY this is so beautiful an amazing stunning example of spirit in form. You darling boy really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills I see my darling daughter pre-empted me today, luckily for me she’s now gone off to earn her crust This really is so visual darling boy, I love it, exquisite place you have written here   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy..The imagination of an artist is as colorful as the paint he keeps. You have many colors. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy, While krissy is gone, thanks and a Martie, Always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, Sorry sweet but I noticed that I didn't answer you beautiful comment. Thank you. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour oh how lovely this is, I love the last two lines and am a butterfly lover. floria Floria |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey my man! Really enjoyed this (but I gotta go ponder what Doreen said ... ha!) Wonderful! jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Jwesley, Thank you for the comment. Doreen was just having fun. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sy, your peaceful, beautiful poem makes me smile. Thank you. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, That's wonderful, thanks for the read. |
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