Open Poetry #19 |
Inner Reflections |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
My inner reflections feel your whisper, your wings of thought& simple poems speak of love and desire, but there is no simplicity where angels tread and eagles soar& moments of time are gazed upon in love and faith of the heart, my heart but a single thread waiting for you to weave together the colors of us like the light from the sun or the moon gathering it's flame from the same strength We freely flow from the same stream blending waters into the vast sea, yet I feel as lonely as the pelican perched upon a hardened wood piling driven deeper in drowning waters caught by the under toes of life teach me your life, show me how it feels, show me how it feels in the shadows of loss you pull in and I begin to see, I become what others see me as, and still you touch me like no other, but there are times I need a defense against my heart expressed silently as my world takes shape where underneath the wheels of passion you leave me stranded as you have before still you touch me Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-03-2002 07:59 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling girl and YOU bring so much of it Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly wonderful As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my heart but a single thread waiting for you to weave together the colors of us like the light from the sun or the moon gathering it's flame from the same strength ================================ show me how it feels in the shadows of loss you pull in and I begin to see, I become what others see me as, and still you touch me like no other, but there are times I need a defense against my heart expressed silently as my world takes shape where underneath the wheels of passion you leave me stranded as you have before still you touch me ================================= oh girl...dont I know this. as I was reading this, a song line came to mind..."the consequences of falling" ... *sigh* ... the moth in me says the fall is worth it all...but then those defences kick in. Beautiful write of inner discovery. heart-hugs mothy me So it seems your saving grace was only saving face, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, Lauren, you speak volumes...and not just about yourself... how do I know this? By looking at your quotation of Plato... fly high, Poetess... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wow!!!!! We freely flow from the same stream blending waters into the vast sea, yet I feel as lonely as the pelican perched upon a hardened wood piling driven deeper in drowning waters caught by the under toes of life exquisite poetry, Lauren copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"driven deeper in drowning waters caught by the under toes of life teach me your life, show me how it feels, show me how it feels in the shadows of loss you pull in and I begin to see, I become what others see me as, and still you touch me like no other," Most beautiful and touching words. great work Lauren, floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I become what others see me as, and still you touch me like no other, but there are times I need a defense against my heart expressed silently as my world takes shape where underneath the wheels of passion you leave me stranded as you have before still you touch me" (smiles) Wow, this is excellent, sweet friend, your words never cease to amaze me, passion indeed can be difficult to bear sometimes but as long as we keep conscientious, true joy will come to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Not to take away from my own poem, but does anyone see the graphics???? I have been trying to learn this and I am determined...LOL so someone say yeah or nay....LOL [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-03-2002 08:02 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Yup...you did it! And what deep meaning in this heart felt poem. I haven't seen quite this style from you before but still that classic Lauren impact. Lovely...simply lovely. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I see it and it looks fine. The poem is wonderful hon. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Lauren hi there, this is really deep in meaning and content and very very lovely. You’ve written this well very well I see my mum has been here before me, which shows she has taste, and also that I didn’t get a chance to make my contribution to the blue pages last night. Ha mum, I got here eventually Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
It is kinda a new style....I am enjoying all the possible ways to present poetry....thank you one and all from my heart for replying...I am always humbled when I come here.....LOVE to you all....HUGS and Peace.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Determination and words you do not lack. A powerful piece, the flow simply pulls one deeper. A beautiful reflection! create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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