Open Poetry #19 |
Spirit of the Rain |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The walk has called me out, this day into the rain Again to summon me to quiet, returned to visions sane Empty, in the thoughts that once embraced me then To shower gentle sustenance into this cup again The greatest fool, the open heart once knew Again to worship and console within the shower's dew Thirsting for the symmetry inside the trines obtuse To seek the courage to release the sadly held excuse There seems revealed here a destiny indeed Again in mists to drop into my mind a hopeful seed To stand in stasis of a holy light to hold my eyes To wash away and clear the day in hope of sunny skies Copyright Kkh 3/3/02 |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Simply beautiful! I love walking in the rain, and this poem was so lovely too! Jan |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Wonderful write. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful imagery and write. Much enjoyed this. All writing comes |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Diamond - It is tough to find hope when we can't let go of things that hold us back, but hopefully we can let go one day and move on. Well done. Dave |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This gave me chills...I was warm and comfortable, reading, and then this produced chills...which tells me I felt what you said, for you said it very well... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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