Open Poetry #19 |
Dawn’s Sky Dance A duet kethry and Krissy |
Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Dawn’s Sky Dance A duet Dance into dawning sky See the blush of Pink as it brushes With light Delicate soft Streaks of Whispered dawn Sprightly the sun rises Bringing with it Yellow and gold To add To the harmony Of the rose pink hue Heralds of day Watch the light grow Casting golden Glow of sun’s touch Dawns fingers Seeking Streaking the sky With light Which sings Music swells As the dawn breaks Shattering night Silence Kisses the earth And warms As it kisses The morning light Sings as it enfolds See the air begin To flow over all The dawn With it’s paint box Brightening Lightening the sky Dawn calls Now the sky A light Waits And hallelujah’s chorus To the waiting dawn As night takes up Her tresses To depart and hide the starlight is gone Dawn is nigh In triumph The day greets her Kethry & Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS FABULOUS, YOU TWO MAKE WONDERFUL POETIC MAGIC TOGETHER!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I saw the whoile vision of dawn while reading this, the colors of your heart blend together beautifully in this! We all love you both so much, sweet friend, kudos to you both, BRAVO!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Krissy and Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is beautiful. I could almost get up early to see this sunrise! You two write well together. And thank you both for the thoughtful words today. Sandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very beautifully done (by beautiful people, of course). Enjoyed the second read even more.. jwesley |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Keth/Krissy - Very nice. Each stanza builds upon another until it reaches a crescendo. Enjoyed this very much. Dave |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy first and foremost thanks for writing this with me, you made it such a special ten minutes it was almost like something I used to do but can't quite remember. and thanks for not dismembering my words. Noah, thanks for stopping this early morn. Krissy made it easy for me all I had to do was fill in the gaps. Sandra if you get up early you will be alone...I vaguely remember this time of day when I was young and coming home or getting up. Now I just remember. jwesley, On behalf of a beautiful peo or those with ple I thank you. Dave, I'm glad you used crescendo instead of the other "c" word it might build to. Did you remember in time she's Marsha's daughter and think back on what Marsha and I duelled about? If so - good memory, Kudos. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This passed over beautifully...you both did a splendid job! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The morning light Sings as it enfolds...as did your words beautiful *s Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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RavenSnow Junior Member
since 2002-01-30
Posts 16 |
Absolutely beautiful you two. Though I am well acquainted with Keth's great works, I suppose this is the first time I've read Krissy's. This is wonderful. RS |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is beautiful...wonderful job Krissy and Keth! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so visual, wonderfully expressed and I love the rainbow hues you used to express it. great visual poem. floria Floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
YEAHHHHHH this is Grand and so beautiful.....from you both.... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Keth and Krissy....superbly written and collaborated....such a tranquil and peaceful write of the dawn... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful...beautiful...and more beautiful. You two did a fabulous job on this one. ((hugs)) copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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