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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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If only you knew how I feast upon your words and all the ways I get lost in them. Warmed by the wonder, and every vision you impart; steaming before my eyes~ Like a sweet aroma wafts through the air each touch of the kneading every taste in the seasoning rising to the moment. Measured by a half cup, give or take a little bit here or there~~~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BluesSerenade, only the half cup? It seems to me that the cup is overflowing in this write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
I think, LA, that is the reason i read so much, to drink up words imbibe on the writer's passion and share a cup of themselves. You have developed such an amazing talent to say exactly what you mean in your poetry. Wonderful, LA! be well, and smile tSR |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Kethry~ A half cup is better than an empty cup, at least I've got a cup to meausre! I'm an awful cook but I know what I like.  Thanks Kethry~ tSR~ Thanks for the nice reply. Oh, and I'm sorry you're team lost! But did you see those three pointers the lakers were making? (there's my edit signature again) [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-03-2002 04:18 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words turned my thoughts, bringing a smile for the day. Don't ever underestimate the power of words, your words. hugss Maureen (sorry I couldn't handle my coughing long enough to be here last night) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Blues, this poem is as lovely as your picture, floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Blues, You painted a lovely picture, enjoyed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A full cup of adoration within a half cup of poem....Nicely said....like this.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Liking this lots. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
nt~ Our words are truly a vessel through which the mind travels. Thank you for sharing yours. floria~ I can sit here and read so many wonderful poets, and feel a range of emotions. The written word is truly a wonderful gift. Thank you floria~ Seymour~ Your poems are some of my favorites. Nice to know you were here, and I thank you Mr. Tabin~ Vandana~ I'm so glad you did and that you let me know. Thank you kind poetess. Magnus~ Yes I guess that's it, the adoration in a half cup.... I never thought of it that way, touche' and thanks Sandra~ Thanking you for liking it, and please know I've been thinking about you. *warm hugs* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and brighten up my day! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your heart overflows with light in this poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ Thank you for sharing your heart, you are a blessing indeed. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"If only you knew how I feast upon your words and all the ways I get lost in them. Warmed by the wonder, and every vision you impart;" yeah adding this to my favs..... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This sounds like my kind of feast, Lori... If only you knew how I feast upon your words and all the ways I get lost in them. Warmed by the wonder, and every vision you impart; steaming before my eyes~ I hope you are still enjoying it.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
your words are little stars in an empty sky and you turn them on with cool finger touch enjoyed you ms blue |
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