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Beneath The Moon Two Hearts Scatter
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Beneath The Moon Two Hearts Scatter |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Beneath the moon two loves shatter as pieces of two hearts scatter And a whisper now become naught for love lost and not again sought. Beneath the stars a friendship falls as lovers look beyond the ball and life becomes a teary place as rains again fall, streak a face. Before the mome' of decision thoughts being made in precision Love walking sadly out both hearts as two are none, and one love parts A love being left to softly grieve to wipe a nose upon a sleave A love departs on soft white wings as departing sighs in ear rings. I leave my heart within the jar of sadness taken away from afar I leave my soul to rest in this as I blow to you a last kiss. [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-02-2002 04:27 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A perfect title to go with wonderful lines, Magnus...darn it all, but I wish I had thought of putting those together... that's OK. I'm glad YOU wrote it...I'm out collecting Keepers this morning...yours made the list... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous Your writing always makes the keeper list, excellent writing as always    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, has the moonlight crept into your soul this night. This poem is lustrous in its unshed tears. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A good one enjoyed the read. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful work Mangus...enjoyed this much. jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea...thank you...glad I made the list.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy...thank you as always for your ever bubbly response... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Kethry....raining here....billions of tears falling outside... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, thanx...always appreciate your reply.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JW...DO graciously appreciate your thoughts. Thank You... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous Your writing always makes the keeper list, excellent writing as always Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, thank you for the double post... Guess your trigger finger slipped... LOL.... |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
this was so beautifuly written enjoyed it. Lia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Lia...and I apologize for not welcoming you to PiP...Enjoy.... |
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Kelley_Edwards Junior Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 21USA |
If only promises weren't so cheap and vows so easily dismissed...love could never be lost if it were given in true bonds. But alas, the way of the world is to break and shatter and we are none the wiser eh? Excellent piece of work. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kelley...love isn't always as soft and kind as it is wanted to be....sometimes it must be as it is....Fortunately....I have love.. and my poetry is just that...reflections and poetry.. Thank You.... [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-02-2002 02:17 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) This is soooooo heartbreaking, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all the broken-hearted lovers in the world and I pray that each one of them will be greeted by a loving heart that will whisdper to them all "Don't worry, I have your moon shining bright again, and will love you forever and nurture its warmth!". (big hugggsssss) This is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Magnus, So sad and so lovely too. Sniff. Nan |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry As with all of your work you create such stunning images through your magical pen. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, I think is as close to perfect as one could get. Your wording is absolutely wonderful  I really enjoyed the writing. You are so good at this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your muse shined their light on you with this lovely verse. Well done. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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