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Give-And-Take
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Give-And-Take |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Give-And-Take It isn't the yesterdays I miss, but the tranquility of tomorrows. I imagine that I am filled with the riches of you, the power of your strokes, the graveness of your thoughts that hue me in darkness, yet liberate me, tempting a wildness, so long in hold. I fight myself, filling the emptiness with my needs of you. My eyes burn with visions of yours in stare. I listen to the breeze, the silent whispers that touch my nakedness and I shiver in remembrance of the thrill of your fingertips upon the paleness of my skin. As time passes, I will douse my being in poetic rapture, transporting myself stage by stage, awaiting chance to reduce the odds, until Spring brings forth its compromise and we lay together in concession, I, grounded in your kisses, You, surrounded by my love. M * a fantasy write [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-02-2002 07:55 AM).] |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
you are so talented.I love reading your posts. Lia |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I enjoyed reading it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lia...I am not really talented..I've been told I am very emotional and I guess that is what comes out in my writings. But I do thank you..and aren't you the one who is published in a chicken soup edition *s* hugs for your kind words Maureen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Smart Chick *s Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you continue to share your love to your hearts delight and find true happiness of eternal love come to you and sing in your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Fantasy or not...this is very soft and beautiful... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah...someday I will find true happiness again. It will have to be in actions though and no longer in words only. Thank you and hugsss Magnus..well at one time it was meant to be real, but can you believe it meant nothing to someone who is now no one to me? hmmmm did I say that? *s thank you Barry I value your responses. Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do not let myself feel this way anymore, but I do remember when I read pieces like this *hugs* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passing shadows, I believe this feeling will never happen tome again. I have learned alot, harsh lessons as some would say. And love has to be real and proven to me the next time around, if at all. I am willing now to wait and have it be my timing. *s Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
There is nothing more profound than the touch of a love shared...beautifully done GF! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes dulci, nice when shared and not one-sided. M |
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