Open Poetry #19 |
Shades of Hue |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shades of Hue There are shades of hue running true That stays with us our merry way. By echoes and reflections hue. They live in shadows of our day. They’re the essence of our burr A factor of each living cell The DNA of character And secret world in which we dwell They are the mist and dark of night And the mystery of our blind They’re the fantasies of our light And the wiles and dreams of our mind The energies of make believe The filigrees just out of reach The very phantoms we conceive The very fabric of our breach And there’s no one outside this mold In constant search this inner gold. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The energies of make believe The filigrees just out of reach The very phantoms we conceive The very fabric of our breach And there's no one outside this mold In constant search this inner gold. ================================= but ... with some they broke the mold and some are spun with a brighter hue of gold. Good Moring my poet bold ... my keeper of the truth to be told. *winkiewinkie* mothy me Dont walk before me, lord knows I cant follow |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
so profound. this was a marvelous read. such talent flows from your pen. Lia |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling boy, it’s utterly utterly fabulous Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...they are the spirals in the swirl twirling lines within the burl ...the magnet of the heart's escape a place where I would hang my cape... thank you, Sy... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, when you write deep, your poems I'll keep. You write deep ocean blue in its true hue. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done Sy...love the message and the flow of this poem...Nice write.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Good morning my Tink What brash is on the brink? Shall we write of love across the high Or ride my dragon beyond the sky. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Lia, Thank you sweet. Mushy, For you. Sunshine, Lovely comment. Keth, Thank you, glad you liked the ride. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Magnus always enjoy your comments. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks we can do both *winkiewinkie* |
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Kelley_Edwards Junior Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 21USA |
It is those things so out of reach we seem to long for most...enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kelley, Thank you for the read and comment. JM, If I had you here I'd give you a big kiss and hug. But discretion holds, so I'll send them. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Yes, yes, we all have colors deep in our hearts and with them we will always paint works of art and inspiration to each other! (smiles) Your character and voice always shines in your gorgeous words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Once again I thank you for reading my humble work. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderfully written wise words. *S* I like this very much, Seymour. *S* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
fantastically deep Seymour..splendid |
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