Open Poetry #19 |
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Gifts Regiven |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Proverbs : [34] For jealousy is the rage of a man: therefore he will not spare in the day of vengeance. [35] He will not regard any ransom; neither will he rest content, though thou givest many gifts. How can I take from your hand Any gift, Can I make you understand Given and then retaken, All your gifts The meanings are now reshaping To things I sure you don’t mean In giving, So I must be cruel and mean To be sure there’s no second Returning, No matter your new intent Of giving, I can’t make you understand. Gloom |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gloom, I'm sure there would be a second and third returning when you give gifts like this. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Kethry For your praise, but I believe you don’t understand the poem, I was not giving a gift, but refusing a gift. Some times things given, no matter how well meaning Can not be accepted. Gloom |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Aszard, this is so very true, sweet friend, even when there is charity in ones heart, we must always be conscientious and accept only the gifts that really are meaningful! (sigh) This is sooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Giving and Taking - the crux of all... Nicely said, PG.. ![]() |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Being true to yourself, is the key to your happiness and others around you. Truthfully written piece. Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sad for both.....but you must do what your heart says... even when it's hurting |
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