AC...DC (another challenge)

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Open Poetry #19

AC...DC (another challenge)

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-03-02 01:54 AM

Amply catered avenue corner,
cobblestones always cut around curbs,
captured available cosy areas....
considered awfully crass among cruisers?

Ardent callers arrange cumulative agendas;
carousel agents contact around cities.
Away clouds, amazing choreographed atmospheres collide.
awake child, another century aroused, carries action!

Dire constraints depreciates challenges
defined constructions determines conditions.
Dow coupons demands collateral
dutiful chaste divas chase dynasties.

Domed churches dampen crier's dignified call
chimes deafen clerics... deeply concentrated
center downstage, dollies careen
depicted canvasses... disappear constantly .

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-03-02 03:51 AM

Well I liked it but I 'm not sure I understood it. If I was writing AC-DC it would be about something else entirely.

Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-03-02 10:12 AM

I get what you mean but am not keen on writing about amorous choices here

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-02 01:20 PM

WOW, THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! (big hugggsssss) To me this felt like a typical stroll into the heart of a metropolis, watching the stock brokers flood the streets and frescoes being renovated and Chinatown packed at lunchtime, and so much more! (smiles) These are excellent, sweet friend, more, more, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2002-03-02 02:34 PM

Noah,

in fact our Chinatown is a stone throw from
the Montreal stock exchange

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