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Open Poetry #19

your not alone. run with me.

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

0 posted 2002-03-02 01:16 AM

RUN WITH ME

Could a sadder
face there be?
Oh crying eyes
melencholy.
Please don't drip
those salty drops.
How many kisses,
I'll give to stop.
I am yours,
you are mine.
We will get through
this little time.

For what is life?
A brief race.
We set the goals,
mark the pace.

So with me run.
We will get through.
You help me
I'll help you.
Sure and keen,
eyes in the dark.
Let's give this run
a bit of spark.

Slow to see
a river glide
through forest common,
countryside.
Drink in scent
of hewy blooms.
Pause to touch
in cedar rooms.

Lend this race
a pinch of spice.
A season spent
to melt the ice,
that grips us cold
when we do fear.
Of wasted steps
passing years.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2002-03-02 01:23 AM

quote:
Lend this race
a pinch of spice.
A season spent
to melt the ice,
that grips us cold
when we do fear.
Of wasted steps
passing years.

i'm walking right behind you......

wonderfully phrased!!!

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

2 posted 2002-03-02 01:30 AM

Thank you D.P. for looking in.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-03-02 02:07 AM

like the old I'll scratch your back you scratch mine...basically get this message and yes it's give and take for me..well put

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

4 posted 2002-03-02 02:47 AM

Give and take, but always give for not much is or could be without give. Take is a vacume

Can't say how glad I am that you took a look and said a piece.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-02 01:27 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is a beautifully sensitive expression of faith and loves perserverance, sweet friend, may you two pull through together and find true happiness and hope always! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2002-03-02 01:51 PM

I love the idea behind this and the language choices. A fine poem.

Nan

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