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Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-03-01 05:14 PM

Inspiration

Inspiration flows from your pen
I float with it
Following in its trail
Swept along
On and on
Into places I’ve never seen
Places deep within me
On the quest to be

Silently it comes floating
Falling over me like a drift of lace
Its trace flowing
Flowering
That part of me
Which yearns to fly free
Upward it looks
Wishing to taste
That trace of you

Inspiration I’m moved
Magically mystically
Onward on the journey
Into soul’s thought
Poetic think in ink
I flow into
That which might be
A possibility of
Inspired sigh

Thank you
For inspiration

Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-01 06:42 PM

What a great idea Krissy, to be floating along with a pen, nicely done here. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2002-03-01 07:11 PM

krissy,

girl i love your work! this was
wonderful...you have a clever and
interesting way of expressing yourself.
i look forward to reading more of your
work in the future. take care and i'll
speak to you soon.

~amy~

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2002-03-01 07:19 PM

quote:
A possibility of
Inspired sigh

Missy Krissy..... i know i read somewhere where you said you were new to writing poetry .... and i can't believe that!! those are really cool lines there and this whole piece rocks!! ... i bet you've told us a little fib, haven't you? you've been writing for a long time, right?

well, if you truly ARE new to this word game, i am in awe of your natural talent...... hehe... even if you've had lots of practice, i'm in awe, ok?

nice job!!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-01 07:26 PM

(smiles) Oooohhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so inspiring and we all are so proud of you and the love you share with us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-03-01 07:33 PM

Krissy~

THANK you....

lovely

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-01 07:53 PM

Krissy, this is a very beautiful poem..
You certainly are inspired...and you have
your own unique style...very nice..

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2002-03-01 08:00 PM

My gosh, Krissy! You are one quick learner!! This is excellent...smooth as silk and well-chosen words. WOW! (Are you adopted?)

Lia Fail
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since 2002-02-26

Posts 80

8 posted 2002-03-01 08:54 PM

Like I said Talent in motion!!
Lia

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-03-01 08:55 PM

LOL@Balladeer's reply.
Krissy this is just wonderful.
It simply flows down the page like a dance.
Enjoyed so much and keep up the good work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

10 posted 2002-03-01 09:35 PM

I agree ... no shortage of talent here

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2002-03-01 09:49 PM

Krissy~
Sweetest niece of my heart~
Such a *gifting* of the love of you~
You are a TRUE JOY to me~

This is the sweetest piece I've read today~

On a day when I really needed the gentle hug from a friend, you gave the BIGGEST and BESTEST - straight from your heart to mine~

May 'inspiration' greet you with the rise of each new-day sun~

THIS IS GREAT~
Love ... much love~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-03-01 10:47 PM

Silently it comes floating
Falling over me like a drift of lace
Its trace flowing
Flowering
That part of me
Which yearns to fly free

Simply beautiful, Krissy...I love the way it floats beautifully down the page

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2002-03-02 09:41 AM

Krissy,
What can I say you are your mother's daughter alright. She has the form and you have the flow - a perfect combination. I was inspired by this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-03-02 09:47 AM

I knew a writer
lurked within
a single strand
of DNA
like mother...
like daughter...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-03-02 10:56 AM

Krissy,
A delight to read. I can only agree with all of the above.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

16 posted 2002-03-02 01:44 PM

Dear Krissy,
This is so pretty. Thank you for the picture.

Nan

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