Open Poetry #19 |
Lost in You |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lost in You AMK 3/01/02 its in moments such as these late at night that I feel your touch even though you are so far away i still feel the intensity of your gaze like fine lace you touch me just barely caressing my skin and bringing a blush to my skin as i feel your lips pressing pressing against my own with urgency i awaken from my sleepy dream still lost with thoughts of you as the moon hangs high in the sky streaming through window reminding me of where i am lost in you and then the warm breeze blows through the open window im longing to feel you even though in some ways its as if your presence never leaves me excitement flashes through my eyes as the thought of seeing you soon springs to mind my heart beating fast as pure adrenaline rushes through me serving to remind me that I am lost in you i can feel my body tense though also with nervousness as i wonder are you thinking of me right now too something tells me you are as the stars of the night wink down at me and once again I am lost in you "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy, I love this your writing has grown so much it's wonderful to see |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always write the prettiest loveliest words! (kiss on cheek) May true loves happiness forever fill your heart and may you lose yourself in his eyes, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Amy hi lil sister / aunt / cousin again this is really exquisite writing you are without doubt one of the most emotive writers I’ve ever read. Beautiful piece from you very well done Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I agree that you have grown in your writing ability...this is a sensual beauty, and, it's perhaps my favourite of yours now. It's a keeper Take care Amy-girlie, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . it could be a song. . . I know that it could Amy. . . you have grown indeed. . . and that's even more wonderful to see. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your wonderful replies to my work. as always your words mean the world to me. a special thank you to sea and john! john thank you for your wonderful compliment, and yes maybe it could be a song but i don't know how to compose music but maybe i could turn it into lyrics. and sea thank you for always being in such support of my work. i feel i have grown as a writer, but have much work yet to do. thank you all in poetry land! love to you all. amy "you can't stop |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, I've been falling behind as of late I come back and you have tons of poems up lol. Not that I am complaining, I love reading your stuff Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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