Open Poetry #19 |
Romance Mountain |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“ROMANCE MOUNTAIN” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Climbed a high peak today, asked you to come along… Just wanted to talk some, being together, to belong… Knew the feelings of my insides, wasn’t sure yours were the same… Held you tight in a soft breeze, chilling but gentle, as it came… Touched and felt warm lips, moist they were, as the dew… Soft also with desire, only have been so very few… Left the high place that day, hands held tight, not to abandon… Love is what we had found, high, on romance mountain… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your words always have us singing with delight and rapture! (big hugggsssss) May you forever find true happiness on the mountains of love that reach the heavens, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* she is so very lucky to share your heart...this poem melts me and has me yearning for a romance mountain....I love it..**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sounds like two snowbirds. in the sun.. we must be sharing the same muse today ha..romantic as always bill ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Left the high place that day, hands held tight, not to abandon… Love is what we had found, high, on romance mountain… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Mmmm Bill, you are on a romantic roll! Loving these tender writes of yours...I am! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
very sweet and touching. paints a lovely picture. thank you. *~*~*~*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* this is sooooo sweet and romantic penned....love it Charisma |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Sometimes getting above the din of the crowd is the only way to find what the heart truly needs, beautifully done Charles! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This was short and oh, so sweet. Love the flow and the picture. Nan |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Gorgeous poem, Bill. Full of wonderful emotion and the most beautiful part of romance...being together. ***Ivy Rose |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Romance Mountain" what a lovely idea, and this poem is so warm and loving and fantastic. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is sounding almost as romantic as Starimes beaches. Nice write, Bill. I could almost like the mountains after this. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, I think that beats lover's lane! Lovely write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We need a romantic mountain like that around here...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I know the romance these mountains can bring, nice writing Bill.
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A song...you've written a song... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy you are wonderful and this is utterly utterly outstanding writing, I love this poem it is utterly absolutely perfect, it flows so beautifully like a song in my heart, as I said this is perfect This is one of your absolute best. I love it when you write my heart and when it’s as fabulous as this one it is doubly welcome I love it Another for my library Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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