animating (Sven's challenge)

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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2002-02-28 08:46 PM

animating

amorous angels
atop ancient asteroids
arc amorphous appendages
across an azure abyss
animating all

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-28 10:19 PM

OH MY GOSH, HOW COULD THIS MAKE IT TO PAGE 2 WITHOUT A REPLY? (smiles) What you need is a wonderful bump back up to the top! YAY!!! (big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful reply to the challenge, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all that always light our hearts with your words! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mike, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

2 posted 2002-02-28 10:38 PM

creative write, enjoyed.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2002-02-28 10:56 PM

real good for such a stifling challenge

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-03-01 01:40 AM

Oh yes! I believe I'm in love with your poetry, Sir. I LOVE this.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

5 posted 2002-03-01 02:01 AM

Noah....thank you so much for the bump and the extremely kind comments. Your remarks are very encouraging to me since I'm struggling to get out of a slump here. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Tim...thanks and glad you liked it.

Walt...Sven came up with a good one..I'm pondering trying another letter...Nah!!!

Temptress...What a dear fan you are...keep reading cuz I love your comments.*G*

Mike

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-01 05:56 AM

I loved this one *s good work

Maureen

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-03-01 03:18 PM

well. . . this is very good Sir. . .

challenge met well. . . and good to see you again!!

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2002-03-02 12:25 PM

Aye adore alliteration!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2002-03-02 10:23 AM

i'm not too ashamed to admit that i had to search the dictionary for the meanings of most of the words here..

splendid imagery, i'll love to see what you would come up with using the letter Q(that was my assignment, by the way)...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

10 posted 2002-03-02 10:27 AM

nicely composed, like your choice of title too

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