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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Far Away ~*Marge Tindal*~  Thoughts of you fall gently as the sun upon my face for still I'm held in mesmerize at the thrill of your embrace~ Foreverly entwined in the basking of your love sent to bless my life surely from the spirits above~ May I in soft-remember always touch that place you dwell in a corner of my heart where love is in constant swell~ Upon a Sunday morning Magnolia blossom I will inhale the fragrance of you again No matter how far away you may be You'll be back in my thoughts, my loving friend~ *For my sweetie in recall of a song he sang for me* Thanks love~ *Thanks to a special  un-named poetess for lending me her daily quota of posts, as I exceeded mine~ Why ... I do believe that's a Suthern Magnolia~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh Marge....I guess it is very very obvious that you are very very much in love...and expressing it so well.... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Doesn't sound all that far away when put in such a special way ... Indeed a loving tribute. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge this is beautiful! Enjoyed this one so much tonight. *love the note to suthern at the bottom*  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is such a beautiful poem. I so much enjoy reading what you write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You express your love so tenderly...he must also...  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl sister of my heart this is simply exquisite, I love the flow of this darling girl it is so beautiful. YOU wear love so well darling heart it shines in each word your heart pens. Wonderful darling heart utterly utterly wonderful and YOU really are soaring with your poems lately. You’ve always been good, actually you’ve always been pretty near perfect, but now you’re outstandingly superb. Beautiful darling heart sister really beautiful  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so beautiful Marge |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge This is so beautiful...thanks for sharing it with me...your love is so deep and tenderly expressed...I'm so happy for you! Love ya Cindi |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We've missed you Lady....I don't think anyone would mind if you borrowed a few unused posts from here and there... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Very tender and lovely! I hope you share these wonderful poems with him! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Awwwww ! I don't mind the 'obvious' cause you are 'right-on' !  Thank you~ CTOwen~ It's a hop - skip - and a jump from 'far away' to his arms~ Thank you so much~ Enchantress~ Thanks gal~ Ummmmm .. Suthern WHO ?  SmartChick~ Thankee gal~ And ... I love seeing YOU here too ! Martie~ Oh .. sis .. he does in so many ways~ He's a keeper ! MarshaLove~ You're a doll ! AND .. I love the 'all' of you~ SEA~ Thank you sweet lady~ I love ya' Cindi~ SO good to see you~ Thank you for the well-wishes~ Karilea~ I miss it when I'm not here, but love being with him more~ So I think a little 'trade-off' from a friend was a great idea too ! BettyLou~ Ahhhhh, yes ! HE gets them FIRST~ Thanks gal .. love ya' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
WOW!!! just beautiful! Lia |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
A poem as graceful and elegant as the maginolia blossom. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Far away yet so close.. Such a lovely touching write Marge.... Oh..how I miss your wonderful lines.. Thank you sweet friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lia~ Wow ... I'm so glad you think so~ Thank you very much~ Dan~ A nice thing to say ... I thank you muchly~ MyEnchantedMelody~ So good to see you gal~ Thank you for the sweet reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
suthern WHO? ROFL... I often ask the same question... one of the trials of being blonde and getting old. LOL This is absolutely lovely, lady... and so full of love. *S* For the pleasure of reading such beauty, I'd be willing to put masking tape over my "New Topic" button even if I had poems written and waiting!!! *G* But since my muse is hibernating and my poetic efforts become confetti in the trash can, there's no conflict... just the opportunity to read and enjoy. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (02-28-2002 09:59 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernWHO?~ You know I was referring to the Magnolia species !  Now - I slid your idea past a mod or two ... and seems they thought it might be okay~ LOL ... well, not exactly the way it went down ... but shucks, what are they gonna do ... bleep us ? Oh ... perish the thought ! You're a super trooper friend ... NOW maybe MY turn to turn you on to some 'inspire', eh ? I'll see what I can do~ Love you bunches and bunches~ Shucks .... I love ya' so much I used my quota of smilies just for you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whoops ... VanDana~ I missed your little smile in there~Thanks gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad the mods are being cooperative. *S* They're good people... and that's an understatement. *S* I'm rather fond of some of them... but don't tell 'em I said that. *G* Of course, you do have my password... and heaven knows, I'm not using it to post poems. *G* But please make sure I get the baby poems. LOL I'm not sure I could handle the shock of seeing my name associated with a love poem... and Bill dern sure doesn't want THAT trade-off!!! LOLOLOLOLOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ You just keep me in stitches ~ LOLing at you~ Nah ... I don't need to 'post under your name' ... just thought I'd mention the appreciation of your sweet gesture~ And YEAH .. some of those Mods are kewl~ Now ... Bill 'might' not mind that at all~ He'd just have to love you as much as I do~ Love you gal~ *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What I wouldn't give to walk around barefooted in the Tindal mind Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
in a corner of my heart where love is in constant swell~ Marge - these few words tell a story of your love in themselves. Perfectly penned. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Tee-Hee ... now I've heard about those 'footprints on my heart' .. but not so sure my 'mind' has been barefooted .. YET ! Come on down~ NightShade~ Awwww ... thanks hon~ The heart pens what it holds within~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwww, this is sooooooooooo sweet that it still gives my little heart flutters at the remember that wrote it~ Bill ... I love you and your music~ You do Far Away so very, very beautifully~ *Huglets*  Love you ... indeed I still do~ ~*Me ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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