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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859
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Continuum As the sun rise glows golden, And stars have surrendered to defeat, Saphire heavens go into hiding, Mystical stars are obsolete. As warmth of daylight begins, Sleep now falls on darkened skies, Awakening me to a new tomorrow, As I open up my eyes. Floria Kelderhouse © 2001 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of nature and love always make me smile and bring a warmth to my heart! (kiss on cheek) Sunshine glows in your loving words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
This is so beautifully worded!!!! I love it!!! I could picture it all! Love, Bonnie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Floria, love the way this sounds. Makes hope seem logical, almost. Nice pic too Sandra. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Floria...beautiful words and a very nice smile on the face that greets us all... Thank YOu.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it floria..and your lovely new pic too hugsss.. ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Floria, this is absolutely beautiful! Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Noah, thank you much dear one. floria Bonnie, I feel so good that you enjoyed this. floria Sandra, thank you much for your reply, and thanks on pic. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, thank you much for both compliments. floria Thank you Victoria and ((hugs)) back. floria Nancy, thank you so much. floria Floria |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Floria - Very smooth. I saw the night fading into the sunrise in your words. Enjoyed! Dave |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floria~ This left me with such a peaceful feeling, thank you... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful floria, simply beautiful! ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
strbbux - very gentle write my friend, very gentle. Liked it much... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
GenX thank you much for your lovely reply, floria Thank you Lauren for your kindness, floria Newell thank you much for replying.floria Bill,Thank you very much for your reply. floria Floria |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Beautiful verse Floria!! I love each line as it is just one that sings to me. Perfectly put together..I am saving this lil gem! Sincerely, Regina |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Have to agree with all the above Floria, and I just love the worlds you opened in the end..."as I opened my eyes..." jwesley |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, yes...the never-ending cycle of life....excellently told |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Floria! I just wish I had been reading this first thing in the morning with a fresh cup of coffee. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I too like how you espressed the passage of night into day, bravo!  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
"Sleep now falls on darkened skies, Awakening me to a new tomorrow, As I open up my eyes." Wow! I see a new bright beautiful, wonderful Floria! This little gem is magnificent. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Floria, this is a beautiful poem.... A romantic view of the nightime sky.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Newell , I was wondering who bumped this old thing up here, Glad you like it, it was one of the first I did after my son died, an inspiration where I didnt know who was driving me to write, these few like this one are my favorites. thanks newell you are kind. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh gosh I missed some people. thank you so much Rwood for your kindness.floria Jewlsey thank you for your kind words. floria Baladeer I thank you kind sir. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Chris thank you so much for stopping by. floria Ecrivan thanks so much, floria Lyra, thanks for the gorgeous moon, and your kind words. floria Floria "Alas for those that never sing, But die with all their music in them" (Oliver Wendell Holmes) [This message has been edited by strbbux (03-05-2002 05:59 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl this is utterly utterly gorgeous, I love this it’s utterly utterly fabulous writing Yes poetry flows through your soul and it shows darling girl it shows, this is simply stunning writing. Wonderful darling girl utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you dear Marsha you are always too kind. floria Floria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The title drew me in and your work knocked me out Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
And Marsha dear you are utterly the sweetest girl in the world. thank you. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, This is an excellent write, enjoyed. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Interloper, You say the sweetest things. thank you. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you seymour so much for stopping by. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you for your kindness Marsha, and for always reading my work. floria I see the little gremlins are in here too. I posted a reply and it would not go through and I kept trying and now there are three to marsha. no I am not crazy just spooked. lol. Floria "Alas for those that never sing, But die with all their music in them" (Oliver Wendell Holmes) [This message has been edited by strbbux (03-05-2002 07:59 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
[This message has been edited by Larry C (04-04-2002 01:23 AM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHAHAHA LARRY YOU ARE REALLY SOMETHING ELSE, THE GREAT BUMPER UPPER.. HAHAHA STILL LAUGHING, THANKS, floriaFloria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I like it a lot....  Charisma |
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