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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-03-22 06:12 PM



Please finish this sentence:

Sometimes I feel................
*****

Sometimes I feel left out.



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Christopher
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1 posted 2002-03-22 06:43 PM


... like sharon doesn't listen to anything i say!
Ron
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2 posted 2002-03-22 07:05 PM


... and sometimes I don't.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-03-22 09:16 PM


..is not feeling really feeling? Is the lack of feeling still a 'feeling'?
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-03-23 12:00 PM


Sometimes I feel ... like I feel too much

Elizabeth Cor
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5 posted 2002-03-23 01:15 AM


less. damaged. wrong.

Not less than...
Not damaged by...
Not wrong as opposed to right...

... just me, me, my existence in itself, just for existing...

sometimes, most times, I think I am:

less. damaged. wrong.

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (03-23-2002 01:22 AM).]

Duncan
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6 posted 2002-03-23 02:35 AM


..is not feeling really feeling? Is the lack of feeling still a 'feeling'?

YES!!!!  Just like there is no such thing as nothing, because even a void is something.  I am not alone on this planet!!!!

Cerenity
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7 posted 2002-03-23 08:45 AM


Not good enough!
Left out!
Passed over!
Forgotton!

YIKE'S

Then I read a book by the most awesome poet I have read in a long time,  
(Mattie J.T. Stepanek)
-Journey through Heartsongs-

and things just seem brighter, hopeful and then that half empty glass becomes so ful-filling.

Love, Cerenity

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2002-03-23 11:18 AM




Sometimes I feel like screaming

Sometimes I feel like crying

Sometimes I feel YOUR annoyance/frustration with me.

Sometimes I feel like a nut, sometimes I don't (there's a candy bar in there somewhere)

Alicia
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9 posted 2002-03-23 11:40 AM


~...like dancing.
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10 posted 2002-03-23 12:43 PM


nothing
Jamie
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11 posted 2002-03-23 11:38 PM


...like getting totally toasted.

but then i remember, - I'm not allowed.


Sven
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12 posted 2002-03-25 04:33 PM


sometimes I feel. . . like a motherless child. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Severn
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13 posted 2002-03-25 07:23 PM


like a grape...honestly, it's tough to be so small and squashy...and then when you're left in the fridge and start wrinkling - I tell you it's cruel to go past your prime, abandoned there, while everyone eats chips and rice instead! What's wrong with grapes???

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

WHY couldn't I have been a nice juicy roast - everyone eats those!

Wail.

Sometimes I feel...insane..forgotten..misunderstood...and glad to be alive..

K

Ron
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14 posted 2002-03-25 08:19 PM


You shouldn't complain, Kamla. Grapes make delightful whine, and they invariably look good compared to us old raisins.  

And, yea, y'all guessed it.

I feel goofy tonight … (and Goofy's not even complaining?)

Christopher
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15 posted 2002-03-25 08:36 PM


ouch.

i hurt so bad now from the puns that i don't think i'll be able to sleep tonight.

plus three ron

*groan*

Jamie
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16 posted 2002-03-25 11:08 PM


i like grapes - seedless preferred
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17 posted 2002-03-26 12:39 PM


wired...but unplugged.
Elizabeth Cor
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18 posted 2002-03-26 12:47 PM


I like frozen grapes.

What does that say?

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather...
...not yelling and screaming like the passengers in his car.

CocoBaci
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19 posted 2002-03-26 01:02 AM


lost.......
Sudhir Iyer
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20 posted 2002-03-26 09:56 AM


sometimes I feel ... my nerves
sometimes I feel ... stupid
sometimes I feel ... feelings
sometimes I feel ... sometimes I feel

ahhhhhhhh there is my recursive feelingness again






Jamie
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21 posted 2002-03-26 02:59 PM


I like frozen green (sometimes called white)grapes--but not reds and blue-blacks. Cold is fine for them- just not frozen.  

I don't really want to know what that says.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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22 posted 2002-03-26 03:44 PM


sometimes I feel like this all makes way too much sense to me. . .

sometimes I feel like I'll always be where I was, and not where I want to be. . .

sometimes I feel like there'll always be someone asking me how I feel. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Elizabeth Cor
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23 posted 2002-03-26 05:40 PM


... like a soul-sucking monster.
... or that I've got an old wizard on my back.

Severn
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24 posted 2002-03-27 08:29 AM


Frozen Grapes?


You've both lost your minds.

Entirely.

K

Jamie
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25 posted 2002-03-27 11:00 PM


One might inquire as to whether or not Fair Lady had ever included them in her devouring plans.

She may be surprised at how delectable they are.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Christopher
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26 posted 2002-03-27 11:13 PM


ahhh - but frozen green grapes are very good, very good.
Severn
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27 posted 2002-03-30 08:11 AM


I have some grapes...I'm going to freeze one, seriously - just to see what you're all raving about.

Nutters...

affectionate smiles all round..

K

Elizabeth Cor
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28 posted 2002-03-30 11:16 AM


You can't just eat them, K.

You must treat them like a sumptuous rare delicacy ... let them melt on your mouth... Do not bite: savor: sip the delicate rime from their skin... savor the sapidity!

Draw the sweet frost. from. Each. Glorious. Round. Green! Globe!

~megan crushes the hat in her lap and slouches in a puddle of drool on her desk~

Severn
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29 posted 2002-04-01 07:07 AM


er...I actually forgot to do this...oh well, there's always tomorrow right?

The best grapes are the sour ones direct from the vine...~DROOL~

I have a memory of being 9 years old, staying in an unfamiliar place that had a vine, ripe with huge purple grapes...sigh...

that grape vine is one of my happy places..

K

JP
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30 posted 2002-04-01 09:31 PM


Sometimes I feel...

Disconnected:

     From life
     from love
     from care
     from sadness
     from happiness
     from depth of feeling
     from inspiration
     from desperation
     from lust
     from romance
     from apathy

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Elizabeth Cor
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31 posted 2002-04-01 09:52 PM


passed over. forgotten. ignored. underestimated. undervalued.
Elizabeth Cor
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32 posted 2002-04-01 09:53 PM


fed up.
Severn
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33 posted 2002-04-02 07:02 AM


like hugging Meggy...


Nan
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34 posted 2002-04-02 07:09 AM


Elated... to see old friends return...
Poet deVine
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35 posted 2002-04-02 10:50 AM


Like smiling when I see JP's name...it's nice to see you again..
Elizabeth Cor
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36 posted 2002-04-02 01:17 PM


overvalued. overappreciated.
loved.
like an ass... sorry, rock.

Sven
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37 posted 2002-04-02 04:10 PM


like having some frozen grapes. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Jamie
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38 posted 2002-04-02 06:05 PM


sans
JP
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39 posted 2002-04-02 10:10 PM


... blessed.

To have my return so warmly welcomed.


Poet deVine
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40 posted 2002-04-02 10:17 PM


I feel like reading something from JP....need an 'edge' fix..
Sven
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41 posted 2002-04-03 03:44 PM


like a nut. . .

sometimes, I don't. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Jamie
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42 posted 2002-04-03 04:57 PM


like a suspended chord
Severn
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43 posted 2002-04-07 08:04 AM


like a wheel
Elizabeth Cor
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44 posted 2002-04-07 11:11 AM


angry in all directions: shadowboxer

very, very selfish

... and lately, like I need to be

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (04-07-2002 01:18 PM).]

Temptress
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45 posted 2002-04-07 12:58 PM


like I'm getting a bad attitude

like climbing trees

like going home

like starting over

like hugging everyone I see

likr playing hide and seek

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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