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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Disheveled she took a seat across from me on the train her eyes wild and frightened brow wrinkled as though in pain. Two holes emblazoned her stockings like warrior decorations a lacy slip showed slightly though forgotten in her preparations On second glance I saw her breast peaking from the imitation fur from the purse her bra spoke to me something terrible happened to her. **Written from a challenge phrase "from the purse her bra spoke to me"...this was a hard one! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
And what a fantastic job you did with the challange line! Wow! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot Sharon! Looked like a hard one to do indeed.   I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You did a wonderful job with a very tough phrase... Michael |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Amazinging what you came up with from the challenge phrase...truly! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
"emblazoned" ... I love that word Man, who gave you that phrase to use?? What a cruel person.. but this is brilliant! I'm adding this to my library, PdV.. It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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