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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hopes scattered pieces Impervious to the pain Caused by the shatter |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey You---welcome to the sanctuary!!!! gotta love it..slow here, but civil, yanno? lol...Maybe we can get a party in here...byoP? dancing for joy..love your haikus, lady...let's boogie woogie now!  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ouch.....this one was pretty sad... I enjoyed it though. Very well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Paula your haiku is so deep. Hope is what some live on and when it's taken away they lose all feelings. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice. This one's deep.. very sad. I liked this. Beautiful haiku. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yeah, I do know this feeling. Very well done. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - so deep and haunting! I understand this feeling all too well. Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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