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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2001-06-20 07:18 AM

Hopes scattered pieces
Impervious to the pain
Caused by the shatter

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1 posted 2001-06-20 04:51 PM

Hey You---welcome to the sanctuary!!!! gotta love it..slow here, but civil, yanno? lol...Maybe we can get a party in here...byoP? dancing for your haikus, lady...let's boogie woogie now!  
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2001-06-20 06:00 PM

Ouch.....this one was pretty sad...
I enjoyed it though. Very well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-20 10:28 PM

Paula your haiku is so deep. Hope is what some live on and when it's taken away they lose all feelings.
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4 posted 2001-06-21 05:33 PM

Very nice.  This one's deep.. very sad.  I liked this.  Beautiful haiku.


"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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Member Rara Avis
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5 posted 2001-06-21 08:57 PM

Oh yeah, I do know this feeling. Very well done.

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6 posted 2001-06-23 06:35 PM

Wow - so deep and haunting! I understand this feeling all too well. Into my library this goes~

Take care,

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