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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-28 10:32 PM



Whispers sound like a bird’s song
Weaken my heart oh sweet song
Beneath words I can‘t hear
Is a melodious song

I fear what I do not know
Some times I don’t want to know.
As whispers always echo
I am lost in paranoia

So I bought a few earplugs
To mute the pain I wont hear


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ESP
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1 posted 2004-12-07 08:31 AM


Beautiful, so poignant. I feel every word.
Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-12-30 09:54 PM


Thank you
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3 posted 2005-11-05 11:51 AM


It is thus for all of us....we play hunter, but we are born to be hunted animals....our hearts tell us so every moment, and we don't hear.

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Juju
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4 posted 2005-11-07 12:28 PM


Thank you my dear friend

-Juju

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5 posted 2006-05-23 03:23 AM


I can relate to your poem.  Enjoying the sweet sound of the outdoors like the birds singing, but also fearing the future yet to come.  And, funny thing, I do use earplugs so I can sleep better.  So I fully relate to this whole poem.  I really liked it.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
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jarrett
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6 posted 2006-06-27 01:24 PM


I loved it, I love all your poems that I read because they are so so true. Thank you you are amazing.
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