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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Concerning a recent dream of an asteroid that struck in Brazil and the disbelief I harboured until I saw the first hints of blackened clouds, darkening sky upon the ominous horizon thunderous roar of a world in flux, changing in natural reformation I've been waiting millions of years for this very moment, I can see you again after you distanced me so, wanting me to go. I can see your light reflected out there still, round and round that star - what is it? Sol? I'm coming now and I want you to know I haven't forgotten you even though we parted on such painful terms; Don't think me evil because I didn't get on so well in those times we had those fights with each other; it wasn't your fault -- or mine. warm autumn evening we all listen to the news landfall in Brazil I'm so sorry; it's been so cold here and I've forgotten the warmpth we used to have together. Don't reject me please though I may hurt you or you may be frightened of me; we had so many good times together too. Remember the times we played in the grass and explored the living land, learning how to live as one? One man two both on earth one it's coming today he says it's within the hour three two one impact Air again You've got to be kidding; There is no asteroid! a slow steady roar go outside and see the sky blue clear sun empty I'm meeting you once more and we are one again together as it was before. watch our horizon darkness grows changes the world more come louder now 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
A very suspenseful poem. Makes me wonder if something like that did happen in Brazil and I just didn't know about it. Anything can happen. Just look at the wild weather we have been having the last few years. A very good write - one that kept my interest right until the end. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
well this is a very extreamely nice write i felt it throughout keep doing well love the papa i see what i write and write what i see |
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