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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-09-28 04:07 PM





--------------Ummmmmmmmmm don't ask.


An echo of a foot step
is heard though great chaos
and all screams are now silent.

I plan to stick it in a book.



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Marshalzu
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Lurking
1 posted 2004-10-14 07:33 AM


Interesting read, what kind of book are you planning to stick it in?
Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-10-16 04:11 PM


you know I am not sure, but it's kinda cool.
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2004-12-07 08:24 AM


Love it!

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Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2004-12-30 09:55 PM


Thank you. There is like no activity here.

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the wonderful land of oz
5 posted 2005-02-26 01:05 AM


wow.  such vivid picture in so few words.  it really let my imagination fly.

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Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2005-04-03 09:42 PM


Thank you

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7 posted 2005-11-04 01:06 PM


Yes, this is a quiet forum isn't it.... I have a feeling that it may start to show some life soon, but who knows?

With poems like this, it certainly ought to -- and the level of writing I've seen in here is the best of any PiP forum.

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