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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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The Female Land. 02/08/04 Slim fingers of cloud Outstretched Gliding across This fresh green land * droplets form rank and fall like lemmings or those men of Market Garden * She moans In anticipation Thrusting her curves Skyward * Restored and revitalised Arteries flow once again * Satiated she blossoms With sparkling eyes And rainbow cheeks. Lately I have been uncomfortable with my style of writing and therefore I am looking for a change of style. I know that it can probably only come from myself but I would appreciate some suggestions on where I could start my journey. Oh and if your wondering why I posted this peice, partly because I felt like getting some advice and partly because this is the last peice that I really felt comfortable writing. Hmm... |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
As for the piece itself, the personification of earth/nature into the form of Gaia was well done. If you're looking for other styles of writing, as well as exploration, simply peruse the Poetry Workshop. There is a veritable plethora of different forms, formats, styles, schemes and examples found there. And, if interested in something not found there, I'm sure Nan would be more than happy to create another class exercise. |
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