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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2004-02-01 02:12 AM




In the darkest of my darkest hour
when I see your face the clearest
This is what I hate the most
The separation from you dearest

Our secret passion tucked away
From the murmur of prying eyes
We live our lives in self-denial
Between lines of our hidden lies

I refer to you with quickened heart
A blush would betray our game
My voice trembles ever so little
Each time I whisper your name

I ask when to announce it
No time seems opportune
Can today be the day, I ask
But you just whisper ‘soon’



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1 posted 2004-02-01 06:33 AM


Simply put: beautiful. The speaker knows all good things come in time, but drat that blasted .
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-02-01 11:21 AM


Sounds like being on the hook
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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3 posted 2004-02-06 06:12 AM


Notice sneak, snake, and soon all start with "s", maybe there is a message in that somewhere?
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