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Alicat
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0 posted 2003-12-12 10:38 PM


This morning, when I awoke
I stretched as I'm able
And nearly fainted dead away;
I had become invisible.

'Oh, what great fun to be had.'
I maliciously thought,
'So many things could I have
Which don't have to be bought!'

But something quickly changed
My thoughts on how to behave;
One thing about not being there:
It's a right bugger to shave!

Alicat
12-12-03

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1 posted 2003-12-13 03:41 AM




"these things must be done del-i-cately..." --the wicked witch of the west.


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2 posted 2003-12-13 12:41 PM


LOL, what a funny way to start the day.
Guess I wouldn't have to change outta  jammies or brush my hair, heh?

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3 posted 2003-12-15 03:25 AM


But you don't have to shave!  You're invisible!

Sigh.

I don't think I'd like being invisible either.  Just because I'm sick of hearing that Clay Aiken song on the radio and musing over the possibility of invisibility has kind of started annoying me.

Your poem was really cute though.  Thanks for sharing it with us, glad to see your words in this forum once again.

Brian

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-12-23 04:56 AM


Just because you can't see the facial hair, doesn't mean it stops itching.
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5 posted 2003-12-23 03:09 PM


What if you became visible without being aware of it?   Hey I just looked at your picture, I'm not too worried about you cutting "yourself" from shaving.

[This message has been edited by inot2B (12-23-2003 03:10 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-12-26 03:24 PM


Hehe! Such a cute little poem. It's good to see you around, although I've been just as invisible around here. Your beard is invisible though, so let it grow!

Brian, I got Clay's CD for Christmas Joy!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

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