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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2003-11-27 07:20 AM


Far away from home
A distant dream in the mind
Walk the road alone
You search to find something that you have lost
Beads of sweat run down your face and time floats away
One tear falls
Lands on a rose
The bloom opens and stares at the sky
This is life
Whispers all around
Touch my hand
Let me lead you
Breath and feel everything for the first time
Life
We live in a world of forgotten feelings
So thought is beyond you?
Just try to think for a change
Don't let life pass you by
As the whispers grow louder
There once was summer, but now it's winter
Hold tight until the rays of sun shine again
Wings of angels
Cats that smirk
We can only live in our fantasy for so long
Join the rest of the world
Learn
Teach
Share the whispers with others
And when you think you don't have a home
Make one
Don't ever feel too lonely
Don't ever feel alone
Just follow where the whispers take you

Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

© Copyright 2003 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2003-11-27 11:52 PM


Vynette~
Oh my stars ! ... how very, very lovely and wise is this write~

So truly nice to see you~
*Holiday Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2003-12-02 03:09 PM


So thought is beyond you?

I love that line.   Wonderous.

Temptress
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3 posted 2003-12-02 10:22 PM


I hope the journeys are the best ones..wherever they take me



lovely work

Its good to see you posting again.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


Alicat
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Coastal Texas
4 posted 2003-12-06 03:25 PM


Very intriguing stream of consciousness direction of where one is within themselves, knowledge squared of ripples extending far beyond the puddle's pebble. There was an error in one line: Breath should be Breathe.

Have a good one, and I do hope things are settling in where you presently are.


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