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i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-11-07 04:09 PM

Under a bridge to hide
The real world out there
Finding nothing inside
Finding comfort nowhere

Use of thoughts have been destroyed
Nothing contained within
Everything is a void
Now nothing but a shell of porcelain

The skin is hard
A fine layer of cracked porcelain
Of thoughts since been bared  
From braking out and pouring sin

Reality is being sucked dry
From places its never been
Reality in no longer a lie
With the flaking of this porcelain

Thoughts are being sparked
Taking the first breath of air
With reality never being marked
Now as the porcelain begins to tare

Reality forged from fear
Is life ready to begin?
New thoughts begin to cure
Now free of his porcelain

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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2 posted 2004-07-08 12:19 PM

very well written.......  you had my attention the whole time. you speak of truth.
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